Wrists like really narrow PVC piping,
eyes like LED Christmas lights.
Nose like smashed beerbottle,
teeth like lightswitches.
What I wouldn’t do
to touch those hips
like mannequins’ hips…
I wouldn’t move
but, I’d maybe
switch jobs, or
buy new clothes
or start gelling
my hair and buy
smelly colognes.
Woo, those inflated poolraft hips.
Smile like a negative parabola
is that an pimple?
I, and what?
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Kirk, I like this so much! I have some suggestions that may or may not work for you.
To touch those
mannequin hips
I couldn't move
but, I'd maybe
switch jobs, or
buy new clothes
or start gelling
my hair and buy
colognes (maybe an adjective
other than smelly)
Those inflated poolraft hips
Smile like a negative parabola (this is the stronger line, and I'd consider it for an ending, though "I, and what?" spoke to me as well)
pimple.
I, and what?
I hope this was in some way useful, just some quick thoughts :)
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